Spring Moment-Haiku
Spring MomentLying in lush grassWatching fluffy clouds float bySpotting friendly shapes2002by Angel Khai
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Watching the clouds again, Jinx? I enjoy that...but I'm wating for the weather to warm up a little before I go lying on the grass! This is well done...great clarity of image...Exit light...Enter...
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Angel, this is quite complete and beautiful too. I also take great enjoyment in this simple pleasure. Thespianna
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Ha ha ha...Of course you are right Soulsease, but this was a trip down memory lane to a time I was more innocent. I wrote this a while ago but I just reread it and I wanted to share it. Thank you for...
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Gleeful:a relaxing and memory-stimulating write.i noted that each line began with an "-ing" verb...something i am not used to seeing in a haiku.worked very well here.
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I know the "-ing" words are not really proper for a Haiku, but I tried this several other ways and none was as satisifying for me. I have to admit that I am not always proper, I tend to sway to what...
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Gleeful:just making a personal note about the "-ing" verbs.beyond the 5/7/5 count i wouldn't know a properfrom an improper haiku if one was red and the otherblue. i LIKED the action verbs.Go Well.
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Ha ha ha well then you have good intuition, cause you nailed that one. And honestly I do appreciate that you mentioned it, I know, sometimes I will change something I have done wrong, and sometimes I...
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Hello Angel,This is very nice. Glad I had a chance to read this tonight...Take careLucia
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Thank you so much SummerRain and K1m, for reading my poem and for the nice things you have said about it...Angel
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This made me feel at peace and relaxed. A lovely image Step into Suzie's Sanctuary
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Thank you so much for your kind comment Suzie. I am very glad you enjoyed my little poem...Angel
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I am glad you enjoyed my happy moment, thank you for reading it and for the nice things you said about it...jinx
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Yes, this is great! Something i haven't done for awhile but certainly need to more. Thanks for sharing the moment
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Glad to share Whatsup, I make it a point to do this several times a year, it seems to renew me, my spirit. I am glad you enjoyed my pleasant little moment...Angel
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